a scattered breeze
visits the valley
of my lungs
as my voice
sinks a droplet
into the ocean
of hollow air
meeting the faces
of granite skin
and mountain
My family and I took a road trip to visit the Grand Canyon, one of the natural wonders of the world. A great inspiration found me as I tried to explain the vast, empty space between the rock faces. I tried to imagine a triumphant shout into the still, probably rugged, air. I hope I've captured the awe I felt, and I recommend you visit the site yourself one day.
Very well written!!!
Very cool!